Monday, 15 September 2014

My First Commentary ( first attempt )


My piece is based on my style modal written by Jacqueline Wilson a modern realistic children’s author, who writes novels/books for young teens on troubles that can affect everyday life, the genre of the books vary from young romance to family life she shows a wide range of work that she writes best. I have tried the word my story in a way to represent some of these problems, I tried to create the feeling that we are watching this person’s life as it happens, basing my language in a modern way to fit my audience which is aimed at young teens as my style model does in the book “Vicky Angel”. This story is based on the toils of life and how anything could happen.
 Throughout my text I have used a lot of dialect which is only partly seen in the first couple of pages in my style model, but when I looked at other novels for further ideas dialect was more predominant but because of this I have tried to make it as if she is speaking and writing in a book the events of the day, this is why I have used the pronoun “I” a lot throughout my piece this is to create the feel that the person is speaking but I also use a narrative language to make it  have a feel written feel too.
I felt that if I had of had more time I could have added more features that my style modal contained, this would have made my piece more entertaining to my intended audience (10-16), to interest that audience I have tried to create realistic situations that most people will go through in life at some point giving them a chance to relate to the characters.
By using different sentence structures I have tried to create different emotion through them,  




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